New-fangled actually came from my beta adis723 she snuck that in as joke during a beta-comment, and it made me laugh so I left it.
This was a scene I wrote quickly, because I felt the need to post. Oh, the bane of the WiP! Plus it was where the whole dreaded plot comes in, with how Xander's going to react to Willow's plan once he hears it, that he and Spike have something going that no one knows about and that Spike and Xander would still be uncertain with what to do with one another if they aren't naked. And yeah, Spike goes for the jugular when he's insecure.
Hee! I think you're the first to laugh at "bronzed it." I wanted a really cheesy, ala "creation of the moon pie" Xander joke, and that one worked for me.
And to the last - I really wanted to get some backstory, how Xander first heard about Willow's resurrection plan, how he felt about it initially (in Bargainning it seems to be an established thing, but there's no real discussion as to how long the plan's been brewing. And again, the main reason I wrote this story was to give my idea of how their grief might have manifested, since we saw very little of it before the resuurection spell kicked into gear.
And thank you again for your wonderful feedback, I'm enjoying it greatly!
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Date: 2006-06-13 11:31 pm (UTC)From:This was a scene I wrote quickly, because I felt the need to post. Oh, the bane of the WiP! Plus it was where the whole dreaded plot comes in, with how Xander's going to react to Willow's plan once he hears it, that he and Spike have something going that no one knows about and that Spike and Xander would still be uncertain with what to do with one another if they aren't naked. And yeah, Spike goes for the jugular when he's insecure.
Hee! I think you're the first to laugh at "bronzed it." I wanted a really cheesy, ala "creation of the moon pie" Xander joke, and that one worked for me.
And to the last - I really wanted to get some backstory, how Xander first heard about Willow's resurrection plan, how he felt about it initially (in Bargainning it seems to be an established thing, but there's no real discussion as to how long the plan's been brewing. And again, the main reason I wrote this story was to give my idea of how their grief might have manifested, since we saw very little of it before the resuurection spell kicked into gear.
And thank you again for your wonderful feedback, I'm enjoying it greatly!