yourlibrarian (
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2005-08-07 08:26 pm (UTC)
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It ran long. Big surprise
Long is good when there's no filler. No filler here. I like what you did with Spike and Dawn. She's so used to be lied to and left out she wouldn't feel the same sort of anger Spike does. Especially when there's excitement afoot.
Can't wait for the next part.
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Long is good when there's no filler. No filler here. I like what you did with Spike and Dawn. She's so used to be lied to and left out she wouldn't feel the same sort of anger Spike does. Especially when there's excitement afoot.
Can't wait for the next part.