This is such a wonderful chapter. You have so many beautiful bits of prose in here. I love the dynamic between Dawn and Spike and they way they don't experience the secret-keeping in the same way. I love the Willow/Tara scene; you have both of their voices down and the pain and hurt is so palpable there.
And this.... and he wasn’t sure if it was the thud of his heart that even he could hear, or the blood that still dripped steadily down his fingers, or even something as pathetically human as the scuff of his shoes against the pavement;
...is the kinda writing that makes SMCD so wonderful.
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Date: 2005-08-08 12:26 am (UTC)From:And this....
and he wasn’t sure if it was the thud of his heart that even he could hear, or the blood that still dripped steadily down his fingers, or even something as pathetically human as the scuff of his shoes against the pavement;
...is the kinda writing that makes SMCD so wonderful.